dishes

                                                     Finally we were geting dishes done and finished. there were some people not helping me with the dishes. they felt yuk and gowy  there were dirty. cups and plates allover the place.  

auklend

 The Auckland  harbour bridge. My grandfarther built the Auckland harbour bridge. He hammerd  the steel beams in to the bridge. Concrete got poured on to it to make it strong. Finally the cars and truks could drive over the  harbour. My grandfarther is happy because he had built a bridge to go over the harbour.

All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself I will be successful when I can Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart) Introduce who I am Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me. Include WOW words in my writing Begin to revise and edit my work

I te taha o toku papa O lou tama e sua mai lufilufi ma   luatuanu’u O le igoa matai o le alga mai lufilufi o Ti’i O le ingoa matai o le alga mai luatuanu’u O luafalealo I te taha o toku mama Ko te Arawa te waka Ko Matawhaura te maunga Ko Rotoiti te moana   Ko Taheke te marae Ko Ngati hinerangi te hapu Ko kyla ruau ko nofo oku matua Ko Ethan toku . Hi my name is ethan I live with my mum and dad and brothers and sister I have a cat that is black cat her name is charlotte my favorite sport is basketball I dont like doing  learing. The inpotint people in my live are my family. One thing i want the techer that my right lang fall. One thing my friends say are Im a good.

Write an “I am” poem

I know I can do this when I Use the template to write my poem Write each line in full sentences        Use punctuation correctly like A . , !

I am Ethan i am funny I wonder if my cat is ok I hear my mum and dad saying wake up   I see myself in the water I want to play rugby I am nice I pretend the ground is lava I feel the nice water   I touch the cats fer   I worry that my tank runs out of water I am cool and awsome I understand that I say nice things I try help people I hope i wish me a good fucher I am ethan

Two Stars and a wish

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