Adam was excited over night time. He had his eyes open the whole time. he was tired but could not sleep He was going by himself to camp It could take 8 hours to get there
Adam was home sick he had a green face the teacher made him feel okay. He was going to vomit on the ground in his cabin
his mum came to the camp and gave him some medicine to take. Adam's mum stayed for the night he was going to vomit again on the ground Adam's mum said
"Are you okay"?
the next day Adam was a little bit better.
"Nau Mai haere mai - Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience. There maybe mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
Ethan this is a very effective orientation. You have told us the facts and given detail describing how this looks and feels.
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