Boom crash!! I heard the waves smashing onto the beach.Meanwhile slippery sand goes throw
my finger.
Afterwords I can smell sea foam coming from behind me.
Fishing salt water goes into my mouth.
Fish jumping out of the water then a fish jumps onto the shore and scares me.
whenever I went to boom I was scared looking how deep it was.
And wonder what is in the water then I jump
and then a crab nips at me.
Then mum said came and have something
to eat.
Then me and my cousins run to
the van and rush to the chips.
then we pack up our stuff and head of home.
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